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The Scars on the Skin, the Flowers on the Grave ~4

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WARNING! Grammer mistakes!

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Fluttershy lied on the bed and braid her hair. She waited another boring day before she heard a knock on her door. She stood up and opened the door.
Fluttershy made a high squeal when she saw the black stallion.
’’I hope I didn’t frighten you too much the other day. I apologize about all that and now I want compensate it for you.’’ Stallion bowed his head and made a small smile. ’’Would you like to go outside? There is wonderful weather today and I think there will be auroras on the sky.’’
Fluttershy’s ears get up. ’’A-a-auroras? On the d-day time?’’
’’Day time? There’s night. Moon is up already.’’ Stallion stepped aside to let Glassy enter the room.
’’Miss, you will need this if you go outside.’’ Glassy hold a warm green mantle. ’’There’s cold for you creatures with warm blood.’’
Fluttershy hesitate to go out with that stallion but she wanted desperately out of that room.
After two weeks indoors she finally got out and walked in the fresh air. She walked on the wall of the castle and looked down at the castle’s surroundings and courtyard. It was dark and red glowing eyes were everywhere. Cold wind spanked the new powder snow up in air and northern species of bird were flying around the place.
Fluttershy whistle and couple of bird land on her back cooing gently. Smile appeared on her face and she relaxed. Darkness and red glowing eyes didn’t bother her anymore.
Suddenly everything light up around her.
’’Ah. The northern light showed up.’’ Stallion said and raised his face up.
Fluttershy looked at the stallion first and then up to sky. Her mouth opened from beauty of the lights. Almost unheard sighing surrounds her and her wings opened. She wanted to fly near to the lights.
She heard a delicate rustle and she looked at the stallion’s cape. The side where he had stub was elevated and stallion’s expression was sorrowful and waiting.
Fluttershy fold her wings back to her sides and stallion view at her.
’’Who… are you?’’ Fluttershy ask again.
Stallion didn’t answer.
’’I… I have t-though about your story. I… You made a spell o-on me t-that I can’t r-remember you, r-right?’’
Stallion nodded.
Fluttershy look down at her hooves trying to think what to say.
’’If… If it is t-true what you sa-said… My friends w-will come after me… And I-I-I think Celestia will come t-too…’’ She pressed herself a little down scared of his reaction.
’’North belongs either to the Frost lands or to no one. And we are near the Frost lands. I doubt Celestia will dare to come this far.’’ Stallion’s voice got cold and expression turned unreadable.
Fluttershy nod and tremble. ’’C-Can we move?’’
Stallion looked at her and nod. ’’Of course.’’
They talked a little, mostly Fluttershy asked questions and stallion answered nothing or shortly to her. When the sun was rising, stallion walked Fluttershy to her room and wished her good dreams.
’’W-wait!’’ Fluttershy say and stallion stopped. ’’You wanted to let me go. And…. Umm… Thank you and good night... umm… I mean… Sweet dreams?’’
Stallion’s face didn’t change but Fluttershy did see gloomy joy in his eyes.
Fluttershy closed her door and whispered under her breath while walking to her bed. ’’You wanted to fly too… Am I right, Sombra?’’

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I'm sure there is mistakes but I, I don't see them! D8
Also I'm sorry this took so much time. This was ready for a long time ago but I have no idea why didn't I post this earlier... =_=''
And one more thing... F*** THE WINGS! Why are feathered wings so F***ING difficult to draw!?! WHY!!!!!


Image size
3648x2736px 4.13 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon DIGITAL IXUS 90 IS
Shutter Speed
1/79 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Apr 16, 2017, 1:41:51 PM
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Saphira455's avatar
You are SO good with the wings. That is why they are hard. XD
You're making them realistic.
Also, if you want, I can proof-read the chapters you've put up.